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27/10/08 02:22am
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we have to write haikus for religions class. haikus are easy. sometimes they're true.
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Wed, 29 Oct 2008 at 04:50am
radtastic:
Melancholy:++++-
Romantic:++++-
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IF1
Also, sometimes they're good.

This is one of those times.
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Thu, 30 Oct 2008 at 05:55pm
kluny:
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IF1
hot.
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Mon, 3 Nov 2008 at 06:05am
cyanide:
Romantic:++++-
Inspiring:+++--
Poetic:+++++
Intriguing:++++-
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tentacle?!
I like this oneeee. =)
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Wed, 17 Dec 2008 at 10:45pm
neoeno:
Rhythm:+++++
Unexpected:++++-
Romantic:+++++
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Excellent.
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It's very dense... as one of my writing lecturers would say. In that there is a lot to it in a small space... I like that a lot.
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Sat, 21 Feb 2009 at 09:28pm
themilkman:
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it's fine
This is the best haiku I've ever read.

I normally hate them to an extreme point, but this one was completely unpretentious and blunt.

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