Poetry -> Free -> Expressive
the librarian's hanging from the rafter
My brains not working quite as quickly as it used to.
I’ve done inventory and I swear
I’m losing something,
Missing a key element to survive.
I’m dusting off corners in there that are breeding mice,
And I must be smoking them out
because there’s a heavy haze
Lurking about.
Someone’s gone in and destroyed this place, I tell you!
Everything’s been overturned and skewed on its side,
And sweet Jesus has somebody defecated on the archives?

23/12/08 07:13am
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Thu, 27 Nov 2008 at 08:02am
Guest:
Third to last line, that should be "and" not "a".

Love it, love libraries :P (constructive)Could add a bit more to this so I understand the whole picture.
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Fri, 28 Nov 2008 at 02:44am
kluny:
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That was me ^
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Mon, 1 Dec 2008 at 01:57pm
galanteeshowman:
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Defecated on the archives, ha... It's sort of random, but so that it's good to the point it makes me wish I worked at a library.
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